Rewriting conclusion of project one

In conclusion, I think the director has managed to prove a point and it is that being mentally retarded can help you get away with almost anything, but on the other hand, can cause you to lose a lot of other things, like losing custody of his/her children, which can be an important part in people’s life.  However, being mentally retarded is not a choice. Some people are more unfortunate than others; therefore, although this show is ridiculous and is unreasonable in many different ways, it helped to raise awareness of how people with mental retardation are living their lives and encourage us to think of ways in helping them by showing how metal retardation affect a person's life. In addition, it is an honor to be supporting people with intellectual and developmental disabilities and help them develop their own unique talent and skills.